Abduction

           Abduction

On Monday at home I was playing gta 5 and i sneezed and then I was on the game but I was controlling another person and his name was machel. when we were sleeping we heard a big noise so I called the police but when the police arrived.And the person was gone and he went with my son so I ran after the bad guy but he had a gun so I came back home and everybody was worried and they were  sced  but luckily no one was hurt so me and my family had to go to the police station to describe the what the  person looks like so I said he was wearing a black binny over his face  and he was were black shoes and grey pants and black jacket. After that night we head back home and when we were driving we stopped to get some food because we were hungry I went inside the shop and I saw the guy who kidnaped my son so I asked him question so he could tell us it was he almost said it was him but he took out the gun so I ran as fastest I can and I hopped into the car and i drove fast but they shot the tyre  so i called the cops then the bad guy ran and the cops was chasing him but the bad guy was to fast the cops catched up and the bad guy stole a car and drove away but the cops were angry because we almost caught the bad guy  so the cops gave us a car to borrow while our car was getting fixed then we drove home and started eating our food then we all went to sleep but i was awake just in case we get kidnaped again. The next morning we decided to go to our cousins house so if he comes back to our house the cops will be there but they will hide from the bad guys it is a setup then he automatically called my phone he said if i want my son back i have to give him 1 million dollars so i said yes then we all went into our position then he called my phone again then he said to put it in the trash then i said yes but was up a building with a telescope looking if we actually put it in the trash and we did but he had a bomb and he said to my son to wear it so my son did but he the guy came under the floor and cut a hole in the ground right where the rubbish bin is and they had the money so he walked out with my son and said my son is here we all saw him wearing the bomb and he said we have to go on the bus and if we stop it gonna explode so we drove and there was a wheelchair on the road with a baby on it then we crashed the wheelchair and the ladies were crying then i said it was just cans and they lucky the guy who said he was gonna explode the bus was watching on tv so i called the person who was videoing the bus we told him to video us being calm so everybody on the bus were then after he videoed it I told him to replay it over and over again in tell another truck comes on the side so we can jump on to the truck but he recognised it because on the side of the replayed it was scratched then he hopped out of his house and ran then we found out where he lives so we went there and he wasn't there and we stayed there for long then he came then we grabbed the remote that explodes  my son then we called an expert on bombs to take of the bomb and he did then we were all happy then the guy who had the money went to jail we found out hes name is simon  peterson then everything was back to normal then my mum woke me up then I found out it was a dream then I told my mum all about as she made me french- bread.

I am happy with this narrative because it is interesting and it is my favourite narrative and I did my hardest work.